Fernanda Valladolid

                                               Las Dos Personas Que Puedo Confiar
                Nunca as tenido una o dos personas que puedes confiar .Yo si y esas dos personas que yo confio mas es en  mi mama Ana y mi maestra Julie Meneses y te voy a dicir porque son las personas que puedo confiar mas.
           Primero es mi mama, porque cada ves que le digo un secreto o una pregunta me dice las cosas necesarias que debo aser para que sea mi vida mejor .Por ejemplo, si le digo que un nino me esta molestando me dise que le diga a la maestra o que solo lo ignore .Poreso mi mama es una de las personas que confio porque dice las cosas necesarias que que debo aser.
           Segundo es mi maestra,porque cada ves que que le digo algo que pienso o que me molesta me entiende y ase todo lo posible por cambiarlo y aserlo mejor.Por ejemplo,si le digo que no me ciento bien trabajando con un nino y le digo mis rasones  ella me entiende y ase que todo funcione.Poreso mi maestra es una de las personas que confio  porque me entiende y ase que todo  sea mejor y bueno.
              Tu puedes tener muchas personas que puedes confiar como yo ellas dos no son las unicas tengo mas pero lo mas importante es que esa persona que confias tiene algo bueno que te gusta y te ase sentir que puedes confiar  con esa linda persona que te agrada y te ase sentir bien.

                                                Todo es posible con una sonrisa
      
           Nunca as tenido un presentimiento que si un persona esta muy triste por algo y tu le
        das una gran sonrisa.Y cuando es tiempo de loche esa misma persona te ase muchas casas buenas.Bueno yo le di una sonrisa a alguien y me sucedio algo may raro.
          Cuando mi mama vino a mi cuarto para despertarme me levante como un vampiro porque podia oir
   sus pasos .Cuando llege ala escuela  estaba muy nerviosa porque apenas me abia movido de ciudad.
   Estudiantes!!!!! la maestra estaba gritando mucho para que los estudiantes entraran al salon.Cuando di un paso al salon  un nino estaba muy triste porque le disian cosas en ese presiso mometo le di una sonrisa de horeja a horeja  pense que era una gran idea para que se sintiera mejor.
            Trin!Trin! la campana sonaba porque era hora de lonche .Cuando me sente en la banca el nino que le di una sonrisa me dio un chocolate  le dije porque me esta persiguiendo y porque me dio un chocolate
me rspondio  "esque  me diste una sonrisa  "en ese istante pense que estaba loco pero luego le pregunte que solo le di una sonrisa.Cuando me respondio me dijo "esque es mi primera ves que una persona me da  una sonrisa"en ese momento pense que una sonrisa puede cambiar tu vida .
             En primer lugar me senti rara pero cuando el nino me dijo porque me dio un chocolate  en ese prisiso  momento pense que todo es posible si regalas una gran sonrisa.

Sara Hernandez 

                        The Day the Weather Changed how I felt

           Have you ever felt that when your down the weather can change how you fell.
       
           One day my mom said we were going to the park. But suddenly we heard "Boom" and we looked outside. We saw a thunderstorm. The thunderstorm was really bad actually worst than bad. Then my mom said " I think were not going to be able to go to the park" and I said "!This is why I hate rainy days."! And I went running to my room.
           I thought about how much fun I was going to have at the park. And after a while I looked out the window and screamed "Mom it stooped raining" and I ran down stairs and said " Can we go to the park and she said "OK".

         So that's how the weather changed how I felt.

        And just remeber when things don't always go how you plan it can get better and better.

             I love the website.Kids could show how talented they are in writing and how they have advanced.
                              HOPE EVERYBODY LOVES AND ENJOYS THE WEBSITE!

Rebeca Rivas Realizing Talent

People say that they are untalented, that they don’t know how to express their emotions and true selves. Truly, they have lots of talents buried deeply in their sole.

As soon as I entered the school door, I could smell the odor of the toast the kids were having for breakfast. In addition, I could hear the voices of the children shouting and see all of them jumping up and down in their seat. I headed towards the fourth grade table and sat in between Sara and Jose, two of my classmates. “Do you want to color?” said Sara. “Sure,” I answered. As Sara handed me the crumbly paper, I looked in my backpack for some pencils. As soon as found the pencils, I started to draw.

When the bell rang, everyone had to go to class. Unfortunately, I had to put everything away. During I was putting my drawing away, Jose asked me if he could see it. After I showed him the drawing, he loved it and wanted it. He bothered me all day long until the day was finished. He bothered me during I was eating breakfast, in class, during lunch, and specials. At the end of the day, he even offered a dollar. Because he said this, I realized that I was good at drawing. Everyone has something in them that they could shine on and mine is drawing.

           If you haven’t found something you are good at, I recommend that you do, because you could show who you really are.                                     

Sara Hernandez

                                    My Birthday

         

          The doorbell rang. Carolina was so excited as her friends started to arrive for her birthday party. She invited her friends from school, Sara, Rebeca and Vanessa. She also invited Carmen, her next door neighbor.

         At the party Carolina and her friends played a few games. Her big sister, Jennifer, helped. Then we  had cake and ice cream. " Yum!" Carolina thought it was perfect.

         Finally Carolina's mom announced that it was time to open the presents. Carolina's friends gathered around  her on the floor and Carolina began to slowly open the first present. It was a big brown teddy bear. She loved it. She set it aside and started to open the next gift when her Mom said " Carolina, did you forget something?

       " No," Carolina quickly answered. " I want to open another present now. OK?" Carolina's mom smiled and patiently said, " Carolina, we must always say 'Thank You' when we receive a gift. Did you tell Rebeca 'Thank You?' "

                 "Oops, sorry Rebeca. I forgot. Thank you for the teddy bear. I really, really like it a lot Carolina said. The next three presents were very special too. There was a barbie, a coloring book and a monopoly game. After each gift she looked at the person whose gift she opened and said "Thank You."

                 That night Carolina was very sleepy, and as Carolina mom and dad were tucking her into bed, they said, "I hope you had a good birthday." " I did." Carolina answerd. "It was so cool. Thanks for letting me have my friends come to my party."

                "You're welcome. Now are you ready to get to sleep?" Mom and Dad asked. " One more thing," Carolina whispered. " Thank you, God, for my friends, my party and especially for my Mom and Dad."

Fernanda Valladolid

                                             El  Dia  Mas Triste De Mi Vida
                    Tu nunca as tenido un dia muy triste que te dolio hasta el hueso?Pues a mi me paso y te lo voy a contar todo.
       Cuando manesio el dia muy ermoso  me levante como un kanguro de la cama  para ver a mi mama y sentir el bebe .Cuando fui al cuarto no abia nadie  le dije a mi prima Miriam donde estaba mi mama y mi papa cuando le dije me respondio que se fueron al doctor.Cuando me fui para abajo estaban mis hermanas en un rato vino mi prima y se acosto en el sofa de repente el telefono sono.Mi prima contesto empezo a llorar y en enese mometo sabia que algo le sucedio al bebe.
         Cuando paso una hora  mi mama abrio la puerta muy triste y tambien mi papa.Le dijimos a mi mama  porque estaba triste nos respondio que el bebe habia muerto en ese momento  mi corazon se rompio en miles de pedazos .
         Cuando nos dijo eso le prometi a dios y a mi hermanito que are todo lo possible por pasar el examen de STAR y pa que trunfe para lograr mis suenos .
          No todo es triste pero si es algo de tu vida y de tu corazon pide a dios que te mande un hermanito como yo no pierdas la esperansa suige echandole ganas.